Just to let y'all know that I've posted a sample page of the graphic novel script--so you can see what one looks like--and a page of Hoang's layout sketches. Layout sketches are rough drawings, made so that we can be sure Hoang and I have the same vision of what the page looks like; that he has the composition and perspective I was envisioning, and whether there are any small details that I forgot to include that should be present (or that he's added, but that oughtn't to be there for historical or plot reasons).
Yes, that _is_ Jamie in the third panel. And yes, he is young [g]--remember, he's only 22 here.
As always, I'm fascinated to hear what y'all think!